This is my summary and analysis of the article written by
Kevin M. Kruse. When I first started reading the article it gave me the
impression that this guy was simply trying way too hard to look smart. It seemed
that every other word he used had to have four syllables in it. When I was finally
able to get to a point in the article where I could see through the
alphabetical fog it was to see that he could only tell me that politicians lie.
After all of this blubbering on his grand and final point to make was that
politicians use cheap and underhanded tactics and means to achieve their goals.
He lists several examples stemming from the Regan elections to the Bush
elections including smear campaigns and fabricated accounts. On top of the fact
that I did not need mister Kruse’s help in knowing that politicians would sell
their own grandmother for a swing vote in a primary but also the fact that he
wrote a piece for a very specific audience. Seeing how he writes for such a
large publication I would have thought he would have been better suited to
writing for a much wider demographic. He is actually doing exactly what these
politicians he writes about are doing; hiding facts the people need to know in
slow and dense reading so that most people will brush over it and agree with
the person who bothered to read it, or most likely wrote it. I think subjects
like these should be more generalized so more people can read and comprehend them.
I don’t feel like this is dumbing down but catering to a society that is
developing more and more systems that revolve around what I call “specific”
knowledge.

Scott, I like how you critique the author's writing and advocate changes based on his audience. Can you apply this same kind of analysis to the author's ideas (and the ideas or claims of others)? If so, you're well on your way to being able to independently evaluate politicians' claims!
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