If one was to ask me how I felt about the upcoming
assignment regarding our analytical essay, I would have to actually say that I am
kind of excited. For the first part, I think I am going to enjoy the freedom of
choosing our own topic and not from a given list regarding solely topics
concerning the civil rights movement. I am looking forward to picking a piece
on a topic that I may be particularly impassioned about. It sounds like fun to
tear into some self-entitled lime lighter or some huge monopolized major
conglomerate. To address the more scholastic aspect of the assignment, I am
also eager to have my analytical skills, well in a sense, analyzed. Despite the
importance we put on self-validation and empowering oneself, it is always nice
for someone to know where they stack up against the world. Honestly if there
was ever a time to start to define yourself and begin to see where you would
want to head in life, it is now. I suppose that would be the cause though regardless
of where a person is in their life. Now I do not know if that is a little much
to expect from an introductory English class, but never the less, I am eager to
pick my topic and get started cramming my own opinions down other people
throats for a change.
Wednesday, September 25, 2013
Wednesday, September 18, 2013
Reflection in the Mirror
How is my writing process similar and different than that of
my peers? First, I think I should address the obvious, and that is the fact
that every person’s writing is basically the closest glimpse we can truly get
into a person’s psyche and how they think. If you take something that is a
reflection of a person’s mind, then it is pretty obvious that my way of writing
and any other person’s writing style are going to be worlds apart simply because
how differently we think. The one thing that brings all of our style to some
sort of nexus is the writing structure previous people have put forth that
gives all writers and creative minds a common ground to stand on. This is why most stress the importance of the
writing structure and grammar as a whole. The common rules and regulations that
all writers are required to operate within the parameters of, sort of gives us
the curve for which all writers are to be graded on. This is probably the
biggest way I differ from my colleagues more than the thoughts we share and the
opinions we quarrel over, but the reluctance to follow the basic rules. It is
one thing I would like to improve about myself with this class. It cannot be
said though, that might be the one thing I share most with my peers.
Friday, September 13, 2013
Heading in the Right Dissection
The piece I chose to critic is a piece that i hold very close to my heart. This is not the first book I every read, but it may impact be the first book that had enough of an impact on me for me to really impact be. the book is called, "homeland", and it is part of the Dark Elf Trilogy. The book uses the pathos of the audience in the fact that the main character is an outcast amongst his entire race, playing on that innate fear that every person is born with that we don't belong and have no place in the world. The ethos of the book comes from the character himself and his heroic and noble deeds reflecting the authors own inner thoughts, but also from the writers choice of words that lets a child's simple mind comprehend while leaving it open for adult readers as well. Unfortunately, the logos in a fantasy novel always has to take a certain amount of abuse, but the writer had periodicals at the beginning of each chapter that gave the main character a chance to simply reflect on his thoughts. I thought this was a good way to appeal to the audiences logical side while allowing the book to take its more fantastic and more magical turns.
Wednesday, September 11, 2013
Logos, and Pathos, and Ethos…Oh My!
The
main body of an essay consists of three main terms, and they are: Logos,
Pathos, and Ethos. These terms come from the Greek and can respectfully be
defined as “word”, “character”, and “suffering” or “experience” depending on
the context of the translation. The Logos refers to the logic of the piece; it
is the facts and evidence you have drawn during your research like using known
scientific theory and law in a story that people would already know intimately.
The Ethos refers to the trustworthiness and credibility of a paper and will determine
the respectability of the paper and its author. This would probably be a good
time to be a name dropper; use a previously respected name to get your foot in
the door or come up with one’s own radical ideas that a person may respect. Finally
the last element to a good paper is the Pathos, the emotional response from the
audience of your writing usually in response to the writer’s own emotional
input into his creation. Easiest way to do that is kill someone off, or you
could just write in a vernacular that the audience can relate with.
Understanding
all of these concepts will help a write infinitely; that is if he ever wants to
make money at it. First of all, the most important concept is the Logos, or
logical appeal of a paper, because no one is going to read your blog or short
story if they simply think you’re an idiot. But a writer also needs to be respected
and more importantly, loved.
Thursday, September 5, 2013
Everyone Respects the Chameleon that
can Write
Adapting
your writing style to suit the taste and needs of your audience is maybe the
most important skill a writer can develop. The ability to change the style you
are writing in, like words you would use or vernaculars you would use without
changing the overall message of your piece. I am not saying that there are not
many important elements to writing, but as in sales, the most important thing
is advertising. No matter how great the product is, no one is going to buy it
if no one knows about it.
The thesis
statement of a paper or essay has a huge impact on how well an audience will
receive the point you are trying to make. First of all, you cannot know which
direction to travel in without a map. This is what your thesis statement acts
as. It gives your writing direction and helps put ou and your audience on the
same page as it were.
Know it
is important that once you and your audience knows the general direction, you
need to more clearly define you path. Using your main point in the opening
paragraph narrows the subject even further. Once your point is established, you
must give evidence that your point is at least valid and people should
continue, maybe try to relate the subject to a simpler version, like in a
metaphor. Finally once you have your audience, you can begin to explain your
point.
Wednesday, September 4, 2013
Writing for Dummies
Every
person has a different way of writing, a different style of how they express
themselves as individuals and as one would expect, I’m no different. I would
like to take a second and tell you how I like to write and the processes I go through.
Obviously, the way a person expresses themselves means about everything because
what we show the world is all they can see of what is inside us.
My
usual process begins with simply getting away from most distractions; I cannot
stand to be left out of anything so whether it is as simple as a conversation
or as engaging as a trip to the movies. I know the “correct” answer is that I write
down my main ideas, compose a rough draft, correct any spelling or grammatical mistakes
and then rewrite your final draft. The problem with this is whenever I try to
sit down and think about what I am going to write about, I lock up. Nothing will
come out and if I do manage to get something, it feels forced and unnatural.
Whenever
I sit down with a pad and pencil or at a computer, I just have to let the ideas
flow as they come. The rough drafts of my papers seem to go through an
evolution of sorts. I peel off a layer at a time like a Russian nesting doll. I
know this sounds similar to a regular process, but it all in my head.
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